Defiance Undressed At Last

Her building had rules.
Cameras. Alarms. Locks.
Barriers meant to slow desire.

So I waited outside,
hands in my pockets,
chilly night, patience thin.

Sharing the cold night air
And, indian food smelling great
With a delivery guy who had no idea
what he’d just walked into.

Then the door opened—
and there she was.

Not the girl I commanded.
Not the skirt. Not the kneel.
Bad Surprise for Daddy

Just a T-shirt, Soft sweatpants,
Bare beneath both—
and that look in her eyes
that said I know exactly what I’m doing.

I barely had time to think
before she was on me,
kissing me openly, urgently,
body pressed close,
heat rising through cotton and nerve.

I grabbed her tight
Didn't miss the kissing opportunity

The delivery guy stared.
Of course he did. Anyone would.
I am sure he dreamt about a sex scene

She didn’t care. That was the point.
That was a sexy move to be honest

The elevator ringed.

We were touching each other.

Inside we go, the door closed,

and with it, the public world vanished.

No apology. No obedience.

Just bratty confidence

And a slutty smile & more kissing

that pushed every button on purpose.

“I’ll get ready,” she said lightly,

already walking away inside her room.

I waited.

And when she returned—

I understood the game.

A thin silk dark green kimono.

Nothing else. Fabric clinging,

barely covering,

revealing everything without giving it away.

She moved slowly,

letting me see the outline of her body,

every step a quiet provocation.

That was her effort.

That was her defiance.

I said nothing. She was fucking sexy.
Silence can be louder than commands.

But, she was not yet obedient

I could smell her bratty pussy

She poured the prosecco,

handed me the glass,

And sat beside me like this was casual,

like she hadn’t just walked straight past

every rule I set.

We talked about the day.

The city. The night.

But beneath every word

was the unspoken truth:

she hadn’t obeyed—

and she knew exactly

what that meant.

The brat had arrived.

And Daddy was deciding

how to respond.

I didn’t raise my voice.
That was the first correction.

We sat close, prosecco breathing between us,

bubbles rising like unfinished thoughts.

She talked—too freely—about my hands,

about how easily her body had unraveled before.

About how i fingered her

made her squirt and got my palms wet.

She smiled when she said it,

testing, poking, forgetting herself.

I set the glasses down.

Slow. Final.

The room shifted.

She felt it before she understood it.

I pulled her to the edge of the couch,

not with urgency, but with certainty.

With my two middle fingers deep

Started fingering her vigorously

until she squirted one more time

Shaking, Her breath stuttered.

Her defiance softened into heat.

I reminded her—

without shouting,

without asking—

what happens when a brat forgets

who owns the moment.

When her body shook,

When the room carried 

the evidence of her undoing,

the brat burned away completely.

Left behind was silence, wide eyes,

and that familiar surrender she wears so well.

I stepped back after.

Let her sit with it.

Dominance doesn’t cling—it waits.

She was shaking like a crazy girl

She came to me on her own,

fabric slipping away,

chin lowered,

fire replaced with need.

She let the silk fall.
No hesitation.
No ceremony.
Just skin meeting air
and obedience stepping forward.

She came to me while I drank,
slow hips, deliberate friction,
testing the edge of my restraint.
Her body spoke before her mouth ever dared.

That’s when I decided
she would remember this.

No man did this to her.

I tipped the glass.
Cold sparkle traced her collarbone,
her stomach,
the places where breath turns shallow.

I followed it with my mouth,
claiming what she offered,
teaching her how easily pleasure bends
when Daddy decides the rules.

Prosecco tasted like good poison

She wasn’t defiant anymore.

Whatever fire she’d carried burned down

to something softer, wetter, needier.

Her eyes gave her away before her mouth did—

wide, pleading, already on her knees without bending.

Every word she spoke unraveled her further.

Voice trembling.

Hands frantic.

Grasping at me like permission

Itself was slipping away.

"pound me daddy"

"lets go to my bed."

"fuck me please."

I let her beg.

Let her feel the weight of wanting

without being given yet.

When she reached for me, 

desperate and unsteady,

I stopped her—

just long enough to remind her

who decides when hunger gets fed.

My hand closed at her throat—not cruel,

just certain—guiding her breath,

turning her around,

fingers tightening in her hair

until her posture changed on instinct alone.

That was the moment she broke.

She needed to be handled.

Needed to be reminded

that surrender has a shape,

and it looks like obedience.

Each spank landed with purpose—

not rushed, not careless—

leaving heat behind,

a promise written into skin

she’d feel tomorrow and smile about.

Her sounds softened

after that. Lower. Slower.

The language of someone fully claimed.

I didn’t rush her to the bedroom.

I led her. Step by step. Hand still firm.

Control never leaving my grip.

She followed without question—

no brattiness left,

only devotion, only readiness,

only the quiet certainty

that Daddy had her exactly where he wanted her.

Her sounds changed

When we reached the bed

no sharp edges left in them,

only open need, only trust laid bare.

She moved when I told her to,

slow, deliberate, every motion 

shaped by permission.

Submission wasn’t something 

she said anymore—

it was something she wore.

I took my time there.

Let her feel claimed 

before being taken.

i made her sit on my face

and ate her fucking good

like pussy eating addiction

Let her learn the 

patience of wanting

while I decided the pace.

When I finally shifted her,

turned her beneath me,

the air left her in one long breath—

anticipation heavy,

waiting unbearable.

i started pounding her RAW.

yes RAW. no time for condoms here

its an unsafe and dangerous passion

The rhythm came back like memory.

Familiar. Unforgiving.

The kind of movement

That doesn’t ask, only takes.

She held on like she was afraid 

of losing me—legs, hands, breath—

everything tightening,

everything pulling me deeper,

as if this moment needed to last forever

because she knew it wouldn’t.

Her pussy was gripping my cock so tight

Pulling out was not even near horizon

There was urgency in her then,

A recklessness that hadn’t been there before.

The kind that comes from knowing

time is short and goodbyes are close.

Her words weren’t commands.

They were surrender wrapped in desire,

trust placed fully in my hands.

"No no no. don't pull out please!"

"Breed me Daddy, Deeper"

"Give it to me, drain it all"

I slowed just long enough to make her feel it—

to make sure she knew

this wasn’t about impulse,

this was about control & ownership

When I finally gave her that release,

it wasn’t rushed. It was deliberate.

Final. Balls Drained. Deeeeep

The kind of ending that leaves silence loud

and the clock suddenly noticeable.

Time disappeared.

Walls might as well have listened.

Nothing was gentle.

Nothing was rushed.

Only intention.

Only ownership.

She clung to me like leaving was already hurting.

Like she knew she was spending something

she wouldn’t get back.

Near midnight, the world returned.

She poured another drink—hands steady now.

Pussy full of fertile thick 

white cum almost dripping

face glowing with satisfaction 

she couldn’t hide. I dressed.

We shared silence thick with 

what would never be said.

Our last kiss lingered longer than planned.

Our hands memorized what words couldn’t keep.

Then I was gone.

An ordinary ride.

An unremarkable hotel.

A flight home that pretended nothing happened.

And that’s how it stays.

Because some nights

aren’t meant to be explained—

only carried.

A secret heavy enough

to take to the grave.